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I loved you,
I cherished you...

I held you when you cried,
I'd hold you when you die...

You've grabbed the knife,
You've taken my life...

You've stole my soul,
I've taken the toll...

I should have known,
That I'd die alone...

Alone in this pool,
Of betrayal and fool...

To give you my heart,
Was definitely the start,
Of this burning hating,
This gruesome fate...

I shall never love again,
From now to then...

You've taken my ability,
And showed my hostility,
When I showed you love,
But only to be shoved...
Aside from this world,
No longer a that pearl,
In your shining eyes,
Of nothing but lies...
I wrote this one because I read this love story where the two were really in love but they made love too soon and it ruined their relationship.
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ArouraHeart Oct 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Dude. that beautiful ; U ;
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XxXGothicThingXxX Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol thank you ^^
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ArouraHeart Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem :)
Your good with poetry
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